File Size: 2620 KB
Print Length: 351 pages
Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
Publisher: Blvnp Publishing, Inc. (August 28, 2014)
Publication Date: August 28, 2014
Sold by: Digital Services LLC
Language: English
ASIN: B00N53VDAU
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X-Ray: Enabled
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This was a kindle unlimited selection.Read a sample of this book before you buy it. If what you see bothers you, pass on this book. If it doesn't pull you in, pass on it. The writing style, word choices/phrasing, and the errors are pretty consistent throughout the book. I kept reading because there were so many five star reviews I thought that it started off slow and got better towards the end. At the 50% point I was still hoping things would get better and live up to the reviews. I just don't get where the 5 star reviews are coming from. The book never gets anywhere close to that level to me. The characters are lacking depth, the relationship is bland, and the relationship between the other secondary characters is weird. Another problem I had is how easily the heroine forgave the hero. If he bullied her so badly she was depressed and injured so badly she had to make multiple hospital trips, it would seem to me he would have to work hard to prove he had changed. That never happened and made the entire relationship unbelievable.
I first read this on Wattpad. But bought it in not only support to this author but to be able to reread it again. This is a YA story about Hope who has a crush/love interest in her best friend older brother. And the trauma she endured when he and his twin pulled way too many pranks when they were younger. Now she is just days away from her eighteenth birthday and they reconnect after several years absence. Will they get together or has there been too much pain involved? Has Nate a chance or will his younger brother get the girl? Again this was a sweet romance that was not a deep read but an enjoyable look at young romance.
The storyline is a pretty predictable and I could tell the way the book was pretty much going to go by the end of the first few chapters. There were also noticeable writing mistakes throughout the book, even within the very first few chapters of the book. Usually a few mistakes aren't a big deal to me but these were quite noticeable and would have been easily fixed if the book had been edited before it was published.Not only was the storyline a little bland, the way the writer wrote the story in the different characters' points of views was annoying. Don't get me wrong, I do like knowing what different characters are thinking but I do not like how the author wrote the points of views within this story. When the story would switch points of views, I had to reread the same scenes I read a few pages back but now in a different person's view. This was annoying to me because it made me have to reread scenes that already happened. Though these scenes were slightly different due to it being in a different point of view, it made reading the story odd and at times even boring because I already read that scene. I feel that different point of views are great in certain stories, but they should be used in different scenes, they should never be used to essentially go back into scenes that the reader has already read. That's what really bothered me the most when reading this book, it's just made the story seem almost immature. Overall, with the writing mistakes, the bland writing, the repeating scenes, and the predictable plot, I felt like I was reading a story made by a first time writer. It didn't feel like I was actually reading a published novel or book. I read this book because I was able to download it for free on but I would never actually pay money for this book, not even if it was simply worth a dollar. It's just not worth it. I'm sorry to the writer but it seems she still has a lot of work to do before she should publish another book.
While the storyline was cute you had to read a lot of unnecessary things over again because it was one of those stories that goes from one person to the next person in the thoughts or their version of what happened only was exactly what you just read from the other person. Overall the story was cute in a Tweeny kind of way. Not really my thing if you're not into young adult stories it's probably not good for you.
Please read a sample if it really seems like something you will like. If it doesn't make your eyes bleed, I would honestly be impressed. It is so hard to read and feels like it was written by a thirteen year old girl -- complete with bad grammar and spelling. Don't waste your time! Thank God I have kindle unlimited so I can give it back!
I read on wattpad and continued it here it was great,I believe she is one of the best authors I know! Great book-MBFB
If there were more stars i would give all the stars but since there is only 5 i give 5!I started reading this book on Wattpad and instantly fell in love with it.When the book finished i was sad and wanted a sequel but then the announcement came that it was getting published, i was so excited!I was here all the way through the updates on Wattpad to now buying the actual book on .This isn't just a review on the book but a review on the whole experience given by MJ Thompson, so thank you for the wonderful experience and i hope everything is how you wanted to happen as you deserved the very best
When I first read this book on Wattpad I fell in love with it and followed it until it was completed. After I heard that it was going to be published I kept on following MJ Thompson's updates. This is a great book that everyone should read and I am proud to say that as soon as the timer hit 00:00:00 I became the proud owner of both the paperback and e-book version of this book :D. Thank you so much for giving us this great opportunity to own this book MJ Thompson and you are an amazing writer. Can't wait to see what you come out with later.
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